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Jack kicked the shuttle's thrusters into full throttle as he banked away from his present course towards RC35 and made his way towards the Southern Great Desert of Kanangar Prime.  The speakers in the cockpit were booming to the tune of an ancient Terran rock group known as "Guns and Roses." He had just gotten back from dropping off a research team on a planet called Biomnis that was two parsecs (about six light years) away and he was short on sleep, but his current mission was urgent.
The new technician from his last drop on Kanangar Prime had almost been killed by a hive of Trillaspitters and was in desperate need of medical attention.  It was just his luck that his shuttle was the closest flying craft to that part of the globe at the current time.
The shuttle bolted forward, and he noticed a stretch of desert coast at low altitude just before he began an ascent to higher altitude.  He didn't notice any Starglazers or flora there—just a desolate stretch of barren coastline along the South Sargasso Ocean.
On the other side of the mountain range he spotted a group of roughly two-hundred SpaGGetti Monsters hovering roughly two-hundred meters above the desert surface.  The view reminded him of the spiralovertebrates he had seen on Biomnis twelve hours earlier.
Once the shuttle reached a significantly high altitude it began to travel at a near supersonic speed, and then descended again to the area where the research team was caring for Billy.
Jack slowed the shuttle down and made a soft vertical landing between a river and the cliff side of a desert mesa.  The scientist and the driver loaded Billy into the shuttle and the other technician stayed on the shuttle in order to keep an eye on her wounded coworker until they reached RC35.  The driver and the scientist stayed behind in order to finish their work there.
A few hours later the shuttle landed on RC35's hospital landing pad and a medical crew carried Billy on a stretcher into the hospital.  He was blind due to the poison that got into his eyes, but more importantly he was anemic and needed a blood transfusion.
The young female technician watched as the medical team carted her coworker into the hospital and the glanced back at the pilot.  It had been early morning when the shuttle had arrived, but it was now high noon at RC35.
"What a day," the tech said to the pilot.
"Tell me about it.  I haven't had any real sleep in about thirty hours."
"Welcome to the club," the tech sighed.  She was exhausted, but on the bright side she now had a few days off until the next expedition, not that there was all that much to do at remote outpost.  "By the way, you want to get a drink?"
"Sure," the pilot grinned.  "Why not?"
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Permission was obtained from MrJmZack ([link]) to use "Desert" ([link]) as the illustration for this short story.

It is a sequel to "The Age of the Artisan" ([link]), "A Curious Encounter with a SpaGGetti Monster" ([link]), and "Don't Follow the Light" ([link]), respectively. This fiction series is part of the larger One-Planet-at-a-Time ([link]) group project. The story takes place on Kanangar Prime ([link]), and Biomnis is mentioned as well ([link]).

Comments and constructive criticism are welcome.
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~MrJmZack Jul 12, 2012  Professional General Artist
Short and sweet, a good read. Thanks for the credit!
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~space-commander Jul 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for letting me use your image, and also for reading the story :)
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~MrJmZack Jul 13, 2012  Professional General Artist
You're welcome, it was a good read.
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*mothbanquet Jul 9, 2012  Professional Writer
Quite a nice little passage, with some deep and believable lore that doesn't require a great amount of prior knowledge to enjoy. I'm not sure if you're after serious critique or advice for the literary part, seeing as how it's short but I do have a few pointers if you're interested. Still, it was an interesting read and I think it really goes well with the image you produced.
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~space-commander Jul 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I'll take whatever critique I can get! :) I'm also planning sequels and prequels so I'm happy to hear any suggestions you have. Thank you for the fave, and especially for the comment
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~space-commander Jul 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
What is your link for?
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